76 comes before 50 and other soft-boiled lessons from a lesson on The Sun Also Rises
I have just made a mistake that, with better luck, might not have been a mistake at all. I searched the iTunes U collection for lectures about Hemingway, specifically about The Sun Also Rises, a novel that keeps calling me back for more this summer. The search led me to a lecture by Associate Professor John Bishop. Bishop devoted two of the 27 lectures in his English 45C course to The Sun Also Rises. Great. Bishop teaches at Berkeley. I graduated from Berkeley. Great.
But no.
I regret listening. I can only regret listening more if I take the time to explain all the reasons I regret listening.
Here are just three reasons:
1) Professor Bishop seems not to have noticed that the novel has scenes that are really, really funny and that there must have been days when Hemingway sat at his writing desk laughing out loud.
2) Professor Bishop quotes the novel out of context. Repeatedly. I only know this because I’ve started to memorize The Sun Also Rises. Not on purpose. Not with any premeditation. It’s just from repeated exposure to the prose. Very concentrated exposure. All of it during this summer. Really, all in the last few weeks.
3) I’ve eaten a hard-boiled egg. Many of them by now, at 37. So experience clashes hard with Professor Bishop’s statement that “You probably noticed hard-boiled eggs showing up throughout the novel. On page 73 and 126 in Spain, hard-boiled suggests everything looks hard on the outside but it’s very soft on the inside.” Symbolism is nifty, but I’m here to say that an egg is sometimes just an egg. Even so, I’m also here to say that a “hard-boiled” egg that is “very soft on the inside” needs to go back in the boiling water. It hasn’t been cooked enough. My dictionary says so. Its definition for “hard-boiled” begins with “1. (of an egg) boiled until the white and the yolk are solid.”
I’m not writing this because of eggs. I’m writing because of words like this in Professor Bishop’s lecture:
The characters who are admired keep their pain to themselves. We know that they’re in pain. And they include Bill Gorton, who on page 76 to 77 we learn has just come back from Vienna and he can’t remember what happened there, presumably because he’s been on a drinking binge. And he says that, “I make it a point never to be daunted. Whenever I feel daunted, I creep off like a cat and hide.” Now, that line’s repeated by Harry Stone on page 50. The stoic characters just go off, like Jake Barnes in his hotel room, crying to himself, and not telling everybody how miserable they are.
The least important problem with those words is that I can’t find a place where Gorton says that. Not that exactly. His speech is clipped. It’s clipped because he’s drunk. Drunk and ridiculous. So Gorton’s doing stuff like trying, on the way to a restaurant dinner, to talk Jake Barnes into buying a stuffed dog from a taxidermy shop. To me, that’s funny all by itself. Same with Jake’s disingenuous attempt to fend Gorton off with “We’ll get it on the way back.”
Damn near everything that follows is funny, too:
“All right. Have it your way. Road to hell paved with unbought stuffed dogs. Not my fault.”
We went on.
“How’d you feel that way about dogs so sudden?”
“Always felt that way about dogs. Always been a great lover of stuffed animals.”
We stopped and had a drink.
“Certainly like to drink,” Bill said. “You ought to try it some times, Jake.”
“You’re about a hundred and forty-four ahead of me.”
“Ought not to daunt you. Never be daunted. Secret of my success. Never been daunted. Never been daunted in public.”
“Where were you drinking?”
“Stopped at the Crillon. George made me a couple of Jack Roses. George’s a great man. Know the secret of his success? Never been daunted.”
“You’ll be daunted after about three more pernods.”
“Not in public. If I begin to feel daunted I’ll go off by myself. I’m like a cat that way.”
“When did you see Harvey Stone?”
It goes on. But I’ll stop because that last line matters so much.
Harvey Stone matters to Professor Bishop. (Bishop calls him Harry Stone, but that’s nothing.) Harvey Stone matters to Professor Bishop because Stone “on page 50” repeats what Gorton says “on page 76 to 77.” I promise I’m not being pedantic by insisting that the guy speaking earlier on page 50 cannot repeat the words another guy speaks later on page 76. The whole point is that Gorton (page 76) is repeating Stone (page 50).
This matters because it’s this nice little joke that we’re in on with Jake Barnes. Like Barnes, we’re many, many steps ahead of the pitifully sloshed Gorton. Barnes knows he’s way ahead of Gorton. So when Gorton says “I’m like a cat that way,” Barnes doesn’t say “You know, I heard Harvey Stone say something like that a few days ago.” No, he’s so sure of the source of the “like a cat” talk that he answers straight away with “When did you see Harvey Stone?”
That makes me laugh. I’m not saying it needs to make you laugh. I’m not saying it needs to make Professor Bishop laugh. I’m just saying that Professor Bishop, minimally, needs to not ask his students to pretend that page 50 comes after page 76. I’d also urge him to rethink whether the buffoon going on about “road to hell paved with unbought stuffed dogs” should be put quite so cleanly into the category of the “characters who are admired” and whether there isn’t actually a certain vulnerability inherent in confiding to a friend that “If I begin to feel daunted I’ll go off by myself. I’m like a cat that way.”
Professor Bishop laments that “Bill Gorton and Harry (sic) Stone seem to me like versions in the novel of what Jake Barnes would look like if we weren’t privy to Jake Barnes’ thoughts and reflections.”
There — right there in that lament — is Hemingway’s triumph in The Sun Also Rises. With minimal fuss, minimal sharing of feelings, we see right through to the hurt at the center of Jake Barnes and the people around him. There’s real beauty in that.
